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Sunday 16 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey Day 6

My acrostic poem based on Shag Point.

Scared
Hungry
And
Glad they came

Paddling the waka 
Opening their eyes to the 
Interesting 
New land
Taking time to thank Auta (God).

4 comments:

Unknown said...

Hello Toby!

This is the first acrostic poem I've seen. I'm really impressed! You have done a great job of it. Well done!

Nicky

Sarah said...

Toby

I have enjoyed reading your blogs well done you!
Your poem made me think about when I took Thomas, Ben and Chatti to Scotland in May. We had a boat trip to the Isle of May, a seabird haven, here is my acrostic poem.

Puffins
Underground
Feeding
Fluffy chicks
In hidden
Nests

Room 2 Blog said...
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toby @ Glen Innes School said...

Hi Sarah
Thank you for writing on my blog. I liked your poem. I have never seen a puffin. Enjoy the summer holidays in the UK. From Toby.

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